It was raining the day you told us,
And ever since its not stopped pouring down.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
Hold your head up and not let you drown.
And ever since its not stopped pouring down.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
Hold your head up and not let you drown.
I can see it has taken your smile,
As you stare and watch it rain.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
Hold your hand, take away your pain.
I wonder how you must be feeling inside,
I guess the rain reflects your outer side.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
And sit with you until it all subsides.
I wish that curse would disappear,
I wish that God could hear me calling,
As you stare and watch it rain.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
Hold your hand, take away your pain.
I wonder how you must be feeling inside,
I guess the rain reflects your outer side.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling,
And sit with you until it all subsides.
I wish that curse would disappear,
I wish that God could hear me calling,
I wish that you were not living in its fear,
I wish I could stop the rain from falling.
I wish I could stop the rain from falling.
Poem Source Below. Improved and Edited by: Jamie Crispino (January 23/2011)
thats a beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteI actually like your version of the poem better than the original jamie.
ReplyDeleteEverytime I go to this website it reminds me of lenny kravitz calling all angels.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ak2p1MqFMKA
thank you so much Alex and Zia...you guys make me feel amazing. Thank you for supporting my outlet for these difficult feelings. I love you both so much. xoxox
ReplyDeleteThis is so weird..I actually wrote this poem about my Dad. Welldone though, I like the subtle changes. No worries Alex, there will be no offence taken :)
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